Here is just a brief summary of my story:
So the setting starts off in
the year 2322 where technology has become really advanced. And with these
advancements, a lot of high-tech weapons were produced. With these new
weapons, World War III began.
Fast forward 50 years into
2372. Scientists have developed a super bio-weapon in hopes of ending the world
war. Although it did bring an end to the war, an unexpected consequence
occurred.
The biological weapon started a virus that would eventually drive
the human race into extinction. In desperation, scientists have developed
technology that would digitize the human minds in order to be preserved even if
their bodies are destroyed. It was called Project: Spes (Latin for "Last
Hope").
Project: Spes had 5000 test subjects who would then get digitized
and transferred to a database. One of these candidates was Mark, the 666th candidate. He is the main protagonist. He
was 17 years old when he was enlisted into the project. The Project resulted in
1686 failures, while Mark was one of the 3314 candidates who survived the
process. Although the project was a success, the scientists and everyone on
earth soon succumbed to the virus's effects and died. The 3314 minds were
stored in a computer which went into hibernation mode.
Fast forward another 2000 years. In the laboratory where the
computer was hidden, it was alerted by an unfamiliar presence on the earth in a
long time, so it deployed 400 of the candidates to check it out. One of those
candidates was Mark-666 The minds were inserted into armored robot bodies. These
bodies enhanced their strength speed and skills needed to survive.
When the robots went out to scout, they discovered that an
alien species was scavenging earth. When the aliens noticed them, they
attacked. This small battle was won over by the robots. The robots also faced
casualties of about 300.
They were curious as to why the aliens came to earth and when they looked into the alien ship's database, they discovered that an ancient alien artifact was buried deep within the earth. The robots decided to dig up what the aliens were looking for. When they found it, it was a small plasma sword that seemed way ahead of its time since it dated back to the creation of the earth. The robots also decoded the alien ship's database and discovered that there are hundreds of thousands of other alien colonies in space. It also seemed that the reason the aliens did not take over the earth before was because they were fearful of the inhabitants, humans. Because of the human epidemic, the aliens believed they had gone extinct.
They were curious as to why the aliens came to earth and when they looked into the alien ship's database, they discovered that an ancient alien artifact was buried deep within the earth. The robots decided to dig up what the aliens were looking for. When they found it, it was a small plasma sword that seemed way ahead of its time since it dated back to the creation of the earth. The robots also decoded the alien ship's database and discovered that there are hundreds of thousands of other alien colonies in space. It also seemed that the reason the aliens did not take over the earth before was because they were fearful of the inhabitants, humans. Because of the human epidemic, the aliens believed they had gone extinct.
Now that they discovered earth, and remnants of the human race,
they declared a full-scale war. This would lead onto another 100 years of
robot-alien war. During the war, Mark-666 and his friends discovered something
that would change everything. When they were successful in raiding an alien
outpost, they discovered that the universe was in fact not created by some
huge explosion, but by another race of highly intelligent beings, the Maiores.
The Maiores were the ones responsible of creating and preserving the universe and all life that flourished in it. The Maiores created seeds which would be sent to hospitable worlds and create life. The human race was one of them.
The Maiores were the ones responsible of creating and preserving the universe and all life that flourished in it. The Maiores created seeds which would be sent to hospitable worlds and create life. The human race was one of them.
In case of an extreme crisis, the Maiores preserved copies of the
seeds they created into a vault which was hidden somewhere in the universe. The
vault could only be accessed by one of the Maiores or any being who possessed
the ancient artifact of the first Maiore. This artifact happened to be the
plasma sword the robots discovered. Although they had the key, they still had
to find a map that would lead them to the vault. Apparently, the map was
already discovered by the alien race. The alien race was on earth trying to
find the second piece of the puzzle.
By the end of the robot-alien war, Mark and his friends led a bold pursuit on the alien home planet. In the end, there were many fatalities but the robots came out on top and acquired the map to the vault. When they reached the vault, and opened it with the artifact, they were able to retrieve the seed for homo sapiens (humans) and bring life back on earth.
The End
Oh my goodness! I love sci-fi story! I told you to write 3 sentenses. But look at this ! No wonder it took some time to write the wonderful story. Thank you so much. You can keep edit it if you want. I will read this after work and let you know how I like it. Great work Chankyo. I am very proud of you.
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ReplyDeleteThat's really good! I see that you're more into the sci-fi stuff. How long did it take you to write it?
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ReplyDeleteOh and also I just shared my story with you. Sorry for forgetting about allowing access until now
ReplyDeleteThanks. It took me about a day to start they basis of the story.
ReplyDeleteAlso, your story is pretty good too. I can tell it is becoming a fairy tale/ personal type of story. I can see potential to expand this into a really interesting story.
ReplyDeleteI love love when you critic each other's work. Thank you very much. Great critic and questions! :)
ReplyDeleteI read it over and over. This is a complex deep story. Your imagination is so wild! Awesome. Focus one one of the scene and think about location and sets. Thank you for drawing main character so quickly. Think about second important characters. :)
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