The art style changed a lot when I was doing this... I have a bad habit of changing art styles a lot and this looks nothing like the draft. Also should I add another page with the whole studio?
Changing Style is not bad at all. In fact , it is ㅁ good thing. You are doing awesome. It means that you keep trying to be better. Some illustrator draws 50-100 times for the same character until they are happy with it.
This is super nice and exciting! I miss both Lilia and fairy's pissed facial expression from the tumbnails drawing.
I love Lilia's T-shirt and jean outfit and the shirts around her hip. It is very detail. It looks like she is real person. Nice poses and hand drawings. I really like diffrent brush shapes and the text. Lilia looks very tall, 7-8 head person. I like tall( Lilia) vs small( fairy). Thank you for showing the palette. Nice detail on dripping paints. Design of chair with wheels is very detail.
In the middle( wide shot), the chair seems too low and small. Is Lilia reaching for the chair? It looks like Lilia is reaching for the floor because it is too low and Lilia is too tall for that chair.
Full shot of fairy in the bottom "such a slow learner" : To contrast with the scale of Lilia , can you make Fairy's full shot into wider shot? So, it looks like the fairy is floating in the air or show the fairy is tiny.
Is fairy looking at Lilia or turning back from Lilia? I thought it will be nice to make them turning back to each other.
Can you make them more distinguishable? Different neck style for their shirts? curly vs straight hair? Everything I say here is optional.
Since you showed wide shot and full shot in the first page ( great job!) , I don't think it is necessary to draw hole studio. However , I still would love to see next action( story) in 2nd page. You can also draw next story in wide shot( establishing shot) if it feels right to you.
I will stop now. I sound like your fairy telling you what to do. Always remember this is my suggestions- Take only things you need. You have the power of storytelling and this is your world that you created!
Changing Style is not bad at all. In fact , it is ㅁ good thing. You are doing awesome. It means that you keep trying to be better. Some illustrator draws 50-100 times for the same character until they are happy with it.
ReplyDeleteThis is super nice and exciting! I miss both Lilia and fairy's pissed facial expression from the tumbnails drawing.
I love Lilia's T-shirt and jean outfit and the shirts around her hip. It is very detail. It looks like she is real person. Nice poses and hand drawings. I really like diffrent brush shapes and the text. Lilia looks very tall, 7-8 head person. I like tall( Lilia) vs small( fairy).
Thank you for showing the palette. Nice detail on dripping paints. Design of chair with wheels is very detail.
In the middle( wide shot), the chair seems too low and small. Is Lilia reaching for the chair? It looks like Lilia is reaching for the floor because it is too low and Lilia is too tall for that chair.
Full shot of fairy in the bottom "such a slow learner" : To contrast with the scale of Lilia , can you make Fairy's full shot into wider shot? So, it looks like the fairy is floating in the air or show the fairy is tiny.
Is fairy looking at Lilia or turning back from Lilia?
I thought it will be nice to make them turning back to each other.
Can you make them more distinguishable? Different neck style for their shirts? curly vs straight hair?
Everything I say here is optional.
Since you showed wide shot and full shot in the first page ( great job!) , I don't think it is necessary to draw hole studio. However , I still would love to see next action( story) in 2nd page. You can also draw next story in wide shot( establishing shot) if it feels right to you.
I will stop now. I sound like your fairy telling you what to do. Always remember this is my suggestions- Take only things you need. You have the power of storytelling and this is your world that you created!
hole studio -- whole (sorry for typo) Chankyo, any opinion?
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