There was one problem: I kind of wanted to include a background (setting) with her full body to the left but I don't know how to include the easel that way because it would hen cover the entire panels beneath.
May I suggest something? I really like your Inter Critic character with three bodies. Can your fairy say what your Inter Critic said on your drawing? Proportion is wrong, Perspective is bad , shading is... etc. " in First three shots instead of nope nope nope." I like nope nope nope moment, however , my suggestion may help readers to understand what your fairy character wants.
Thanks for your excellent work.
Rhea, you may not like my suggestion , please take it only if you agree. Think about it.
No I agree with that. The characters don't know what's going on so that makes sense. And yeah I think I should provide a whole room to set the scene on the next page.
If you feel like, you could also try removing the shot. ( It is okay . Stop there ) and show more of the painting on canvas. You can merge that box with the next shot. ( So slow at learning.)
You may tilt the palette towards to camera, so readers can see that beautiful color palette?
You could reverse arm direction in first three shots . So it is more consistent with the full body shot. Simplify direction - si it is easier on readers eyes.
Okay, no more critics. Feel free to mess up and have fun!
I really love this page. Is it okay to draw additional big page with her room?
ReplyDeleteI think that you need one more page to show entire room. How do you think?
ReplyDeleteMay I suggest something? I really like your Inter Critic character with three bodies. Can your fairy say what your Inter Critic said on your drawing?
ReplyDeleteProportion is wrong, Perspective is bad , shading is... etc. " in First three shots instead of nope nope nope." I like nope nope nope moment, however , my suggestion may help readers to understand what your fairy character wants.
Thanks for your excellent work.
Rhea, you may not like my suggestion , please take it only if you agree. Think about it.
No I agree with that. The characters don't know what's going on so that makes sense. And yeah I think I should provide a whole room to set the scene on the next page.
ReplyDeleteIf you feel like, you could also try removing the shot. ( It is okay . Stop there ) and show more of the painting on canvas. You can merge that box with the next shot. ( So slow at learning.)
ReplyDeleteYou may tilt the palette towards to camera, so readers can see that beautiful color palette?
You could reverse arm direction in first three shots . So it is more consistent with the full body shot. Simplify direction - si it is easier on readers eyes.
Okay, no more critics. Feel free to mess up and have fun!