Ha Ha, He/She can jump really high for sure! Thank you so much for sharing!Great camera works too. Nice POV shots.
Pixar animation studio's first animated short film was luxo junior, The lamp! Giving a life to in-animated object is not easy and you did great job. Again, your humor is so fun. I hope you can continue animation.
It was really fun to create some animation and I am planning to make new story for my own. I will share my progress with you. Thank you for all of your advice and encouragement.
Special comment from an animator at Pixar, (yay!) --- Think about story first . The story is the king.
Why the sack trying to closer to the flour? Is he hungry? Is he his friend? It is not clear. How hard for him to jump and what is his obstacle and conflict? Right now , he looks like that he is jumping on a trampoline. For example, if he is that good at jumping, he could show more confidence in the beginning.
This is a good start and I understand that you are learning and practicing skills. Technically, this is good animation for 3 weeks. For future development, the animator needs to think about the story and animate action base on the story.
Ha Ha, He/She can jump really high for sure! Thank you so much for sharing!Great camera works too. Nice POV shots.
ReplyDeletePixar animation studio's first animated short film was luxo junior, The lamp! Giving a life to in-animated object is not easy and you did great job. Again, your humor is so fun. I hope you can continue animation.
It was really fun to create some animation and I am planning to make new story for my own. I will share my progress with you. Thank you for all of your advice and encouragement.
DeleteSpecial comment from an animator at Pixar, (yay!)
ReplyDelete--- Think about story first . The story is the king.
Why the sack trying to closer to the flour? Is he hungry? Is he his friend? It is not clear.
How hard for him to jump and what is his obstacle and conflict?
Right now , he looks like that he is jumping on a trampoline. For example, if he is that good at jumping, he could show more confidence in the beginning.
This is a good start and I understand that you are learning and practicing skills. Technically, this is good animation for 3 weeks. For future development, the animator needs to think about the story and animate action base on the story.
Hope it helps!
Wow... I really appreciate your advice and it helps me to think about the flow in my story. Thank you!!
DeleteI am glad that it was helpful.
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